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Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Contemplating Grammar - Andrew Pudewa


It seems that the pattern of the Trinity permeates creation:
body, mind, soul; harmony, melody, rhythm; truth, goodness, beauty; ethos, pathos, logos.
The illustrations could continue. Therefore it should not surprise us that the thing called
“grammar” can also be understood in three parts—integrated and organically connected but in
three aspects, which when understood individually, strengthen our understanding of the whole. 

I first began thinking about the question of grammar more than ten years ago, when I met a
professional author—a man who had for decades earned his daily bread by writing.
We were working together on a project, and he mentioned to me, somewhat casually,
“I don’t know any grammar.” Though he was being candid, I was surprised and even confused.
How was it that a professional writer didn’t know much grammar? And the obvious extrapolation
was this: if it’s not necessary to know grammar to write well, why do we pile year after year of
grammar workbooks on our children? Are we missing something here?

Around that same time, I came to realize a very interesting thing about people and writing skills:
there’s a clear correlation between confidence and ability as an adult, how much the person was
read to (out loud) as a child, and how much poetry and/ or Scripture he or she had memorized.
Writing ability in later life is almost always directly connected with how much language has entered
the brain through the ear in early life. This caused me to formulate some basic principles of
nurturing competent communicators, which I have explained in another article,
“One Myth and Two Truths,” available at IEW.com/articles (or on p. 167 of this e-book).
However, I continued to contemplate the idea of grammar. What is it? How do we learn it?
Is it important? These questions led me to formulate a tripartite view of grammar, which I am
happy to share with you now, especially as we head into convention season when many
curriculum choices are made. So let me propose that there are three aspects of the grammar of a
language: inherent (or inherited) grammar, applied grammar, and formal (or analytical) grammar.

INHERENT GRAMMAR 
INHERENT GRAMMAR is by far the most important to good writing and in a way the easiest to
teach. This is our language as we know it. If I say to you, “Me go to the store,” you know this is
wrong. You may not know exactly why, nor could you explain why it’s wrong, but you know it is
incorrect because of the database of correct English you carry around in your brain.
Generally it is “inherited” from our parents, which underscores the extreme importance of correct
language in the environment (and the perilous consequences of a deficient or incorrect language
environment). If we speak and write correctly, it’s probably not because we studied years of
grammar; it’s probably because we heard our parents and teachers speaking correctly and reading
good books to us during our early years. This creates our database of language patterns and forms
our inherent or instinctive grammar. We know right expression from wrong expression because we
subconsciously and instantaneously compare it against the database of correct language stored in the brain.


APPLIED GRAMMAR
The next aspect of grammar we often encounter is what I would call APPLIED GRAMMAR .
This is the grammar we use to fix stuff. We hear, “Me go to the store,” and we know it’s wrong, and
we know how to fix it: “I will go to the store.” Again, we don’t know why it’s wrong or how we
fixed it; we just know that one is wrong and the other is correct. This aspect of grammar
knowledge develops in tandem with inherent grammar and can be practiced intentionally with
various editing skills programs. 

"If we speak and write correctly, it’s probably not because we studied years of grammar “ 


ANALYTICAL GRAMMAR
The third aspect of the thing called grammar is what might be called formal or ANALYTICAL
GRAMMAR. This consists of knowing “what those things are called” and “what are the rules
governing their behavior.” This consists This is the type of grammar practice we often find in
grammar or language arts workbooks. And what’s so ironic is that this is the least relevant
(and therefore hardest to teach) part of grammar, at least to a native speaker of the language.
When you say to a young English-speaking child, “You have to learn English grammar,” it’s a bit
like saying: “Son, sit down. I need to explain to you how you ride a bike.” The child, of course,
knows how to ride a bike and says, “Dad, I know how to ride a bike.” But the father responds:
“Yes, you do. But you don’t know how you do it—you need to know all the biology and physics that
make bike riding possible!” The child, of course, is thinking (or saying): “Ummm, can I just go ride
my bike? What’s the point?” So when we try to explain to a child how to use English
— something he already does perfectly or at least believes he does—the relevancy is low.
Consequently, learning it is difficult.

"When you study a language you don’t already know,
that’s when you need to know what those things are called and what the rules that govern their behavior are . . . “ 


Now I’m not saying we shouldn’t teach formal grammar, but what I would suggest is that it’s most
easily learned by studying a foreign language because, when you study a language you don’t
already know, that’s when you need to know what those things are called and what the rules that
govern their behavior are. When I meet a student who actually knows a bit of formal grammar
(“That’s an infinitive!”), and I ask him where he learned it, the answer is never
“From my _________ _________ Grammar Program.” It’s always “From Latin” or “From French.”
I meet countless adults who will say something like “I never understood English grammar till I took
German in college.” It makes so much sense. So, my approach to grammar is this: Don’t worry
much about formal grammar in the elementary grades; teach writing and mechanics as needs
arise, read out loud in huge quantity to your children, and have them memorize a lot of poetry,
Scripture, and speeches. Build their inherent grammar, because that’s by far the most important
thing. As they get a bit older, introduce some editing practice materials; several options are
available. (My favorite is the one we publish: Fix-It! Grammar.) Study formal grammar later
(middle or high school age), preferably within the context of a foreign language (and Latin is the
best!). And if by tenth grade or so you perceive a weakness in your student’s understanding of
grammar, then maybe pick up an analytical grammar program to fill in the gaps, even while
realizing it’s not the most vital thing you’re doing.

Don’t worry much about formal grammar . . . ;
teach writing and mechanics as needs arise, read out loud in huge quantity to your children,
and have “ them memorize a lot of poetry, Scripture, and speeches . . . “

Grammar is important. Language should be precise. We must teach it well.
However, let us not be confused or distracted by feeling a need to teach formal grammar too soon
to children who are too young. First build the database of language patterns (inherent grammar),
practice applying that database to writing and editing (applied grammar), and finally study formal
grammar by learning Latin. By these means we will nurture excellent writers who can effectively
self-edit and even know what they’re doing and how they do it.


Sunday, April 15, 2012

OVERVIEW - Immaculate Heart of Mary's IEW co-op class



Reading maketh a full man.
Speaking maketh a ready man.
Writing maketh an exact man.
~Sir Francis Bacon 
The IHM co-op will be offering an Excellence in Writing class in 2011-12. Excellence in Writing successfully equips students with tools to significantly improve their writing skills. Its methods not only build written and oral communication skills, but also improve critical thinking.  

Excellence in Writing methods can also be used across the curriculum to reinforce content area. Students learn to write as they write to learn. With diligent and consistent effort there is a wonderful transformation from immature or even reluctant writers to competent, confident communicators. It is possible to teach students with very high writing aptitude alongside those with undeveloped writing aptitude, and the system works magnificently at both ends of that spectrum.

Each lesson in our co-op class is carefully planned to be a step toward more sophisticated writing.  

Lessons build from one paragraph summaries to three paragraph essays and on to a five paragraph essay with introduction, conclusion, and bibliography. 
After mastering the five paragraph essay the next step is a “super essay.” A "super essay" consists of three 5-paragraph essays tied together with super introduction and super conclusion paragraphs.
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Required material for Immaculate Heart of Mary's  IEW co-op class

1)  Teaching Writing Structure & Style $35.00 at the IEW site 

2)  A medium 3 ring binder with @ least 7 dividers 
  • class notes & exercises
  • assignments
  • vocabulary
  •  "Fix-Its" grammar
  • assignments
  • tests
  • extra paper

3) A large 3-ring binder for a work sample PORTFOLIO (to be submitted in December and again in the spring)

PhotobucketSuggested material for Immaculate Heart of Mary's IEW co-op class


Portable Wall 

This contains writing models and helpful, easily accessible information on a tri-fold pocket folder.




  

Here are the official units covered in the  TWSS  lessons:
 

Units 1-2
Note Making and Summarizing including Stylistic Techniques and Dress Ups
 

Unit 3
Summarizing Narratives Stories and introducing Sentence Openers
 

Unit 4
Summarizing Reference for Library Reports and adding in Advanced Dress-Ups: Decorations, Triples
 

Unit 5
Writing from Pictures
 

Unit 6
Reports from Multiple Sources (extension of Unit 4)
 

Unit 7
Creative Writing and introducing introductions and conclusions.
 

Unit 8
Essays: Basic, Expanded, Super-Essay, Persuasive (extension of Units 4 and 6)
 

Unit 9
Critiques, Book Reports, and Reviews


http://www.excellenceinwriting.com/usrdownloads/WhatAreWeReallyDoingHere.mp3 

A parent review from Curriculum Choice:
Writing with Their Own Voice: It has always been important to me to have my children develop their own voice in their writing, to have the paper sound like it is from their own thoughts and reasoning. IEW has helped my boys use the IEW tools in a way that makes writing in their own words easier. At first the checklists provided with the lessons seemed cumbersome and awkward. They did not enjoy all the “box checking”. For instance, as the sentence openers are introduced they had to go back and rewrite a lot of their sentences to make sure they had used each sentence opener tool .  The editing process was tedious and we all loathed that time of the week when we would review the writing and the checklist together. Progressively, each time we used the sentence opener tools in our writing, it became more natural. Now as the boys write an essay they can easily insert the sentence openers as they go along, they are on their mind. By incorporating the various style tools in the TWSS program, they have found their writing voice. 

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In order to succeed in every area of life, children must hone the skills needed to communicate confidently and effectively. 

How does the Institute for Excellence in Writing help students move towards this goal?

Through the process of learning to write well, students learn how to think clearly and to express themselves eloquently and persuasively.



Saturday, April 14, 2012

UPCOMING IEW WEBINARS

http://www.excellenceinwriting.com/seminar

APRIL 2012 --> DECEMBER 2012


Event Datesort iconEvent NameLocationHosting OrganizationIEW SpeakerIEW Exhibitor
4/16/2012Free Webinar: Presenting Primary Arts of Language (PAL)OK - Locust GroveIEWJill Pike
4/19/2012Cincinnati, OH - High School Essay IntensiveOH - CincinnatiIEWAndrew Pudewa
4/25/2012Free Webinar - School Administrators & Teachers: Experience Excellence in WritingOK - Locust GroveIEWJanet Spitler
4/27/2012Roswell, GA - High School Essay Intensive FULLGA - RoswellIEWAndrew Pudewa
4/30/2012Free Webinar: Unit 9 Formal Critiques: A Reasonable Replacement for Going Beyond the Boring Book ReportOK - Locust GroveIEWAndrew Pudewa
5/4/2012Indianapolis, IN - High School Essay IntensiveIN - IndianapolisIEWAndrew Pudewa
5/17/2012Rancho Cucamonga, CA - Student WorkshopsCA - Rancho CucamongaIEWAndrew PudewaJulie Walker
5/17/2012Free Event: Rancho Cucamonga, CA - Nurturing Competent CommunicatorsCA - Rancho CucamongaIEWAndrew Pudewa
5/18/2012Rancho Cucamonga, CA - Student Workshops FULLCA - Rancho CucamongaIEWAndrew PudewaJulie Walker
5/19/2012Rancho Cucamonga, CA - High School Essay IntensiveCA - Rancho CucamongaIEWAndrew PudewaJulie Walker
5/21/2012Free Webinar: Experience Excellence in WritingOK - Locust GroveIEWDanielle Olander
5/31/2012Omaha Homeschool Writing ConferenceNE - OmahaCatholic Homeschool Association of OmahaAndrew Pudewa
6/7/2012Richmond, VA - High School Essay IntensiveVA - RichmondIEWAndrew Pudewa
6/14/2012Hartford, CT - High School Essay IntensiveCT - HartfordIEWAndrew PudewaJulie Shorey
6/15/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level A for Students in Grades 4–6 (ages 9–11)OK - Locust GroveIEWCinda Tribble
7/23/2012Writing Educator's Symposium 2012MN - St. PaulIEWAndrew PudewaJan Miller
8/9/2012Maryville, TN - Student WorkshopsTN - MaryvilleBHEA - Blount Home Education Association (Registration is through IEW)Andrew PudewaCathy Flowers
8/9/2012Free Event: Maryville, TN - Nurturing Competent CommunicatorsTN - MaryvilleBHEA - Blount Home Education Association (Registration is through IEW)Andrew PudewaCathy Flowers
8/10/2012Maryville, TN - High School Essay IntensiveTN - MaryvilleIEWBHEA - Blount Home Education Association (Registration is through IEW)Andrew PudewaCathy Flowers
8/11/2012Maryville, TN - Mini ConferenceTN - MaryvilleThe Blount Home Education AssociationAndrew PudewaCathy Flowers
8/14/2012Gainesville, FL - Homeschool Writing EventsFL - GainesvilleCornerstone AcademyAndrew Pudewa
8/21/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level B for Students in Grades 6–8 (ages 11–13), Semester 1*OK - Locust GroveIEW

8/21/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level B for Students in Grades 6–8 (ages 11–13) RESTRICTEDOK - Locust GroveIEWPamela White
8/21/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level C for High Schoolers (ages 13 and above) RESTRICTEDOK - Locust GroveIEWPamela White
8/22/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level C for High Schoolers (ages 13 and above), Semester 1*OK - Locust GroveIEWPamela White
8/23/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Writing Class - Level A for Students in Grades 4–6 (ages 9–11)OK - Locust GroveIEW

8/23/2012Stafford, VA - High School Essay IntensiveVA - StaffordIEWAndrew Pudewa
8/24/2012Institute for Excellence in Writing® Online Continuation Course - Level A for Students in Grades 4–6 (ages 9–11)OK - Locust GroveIEWCinda Tribble
8/24/2012Lynchburg, VA area - Student WorkshopsVA - ForestIEWAndrew Pudewa
8/25/2012Lynchburg, VA area - Mini ConferenceVA - ForestIEWAndrew Pudewa
8/27/2012Webinar: Units 1 & 2: Structure & Style: Starting Strong in SeptemberOK - Locust GroveIEWAndrew Pudewa
9/6/2012Fairview Heights, IL - Advanced Student WorkshopsIL - Fairview HeightsIEWAndrew PudewaCathy Ptak
9/7/2012Fairview Heights, IL - High School Essay IntensiveIL - Fairview HeightsIEWAndrew PudewaCathy Ptak
9/7/2012Free Event: Fairview Heights, IL - Conquering Corrupt CultureIL - Fairview HeightsIEWAndrew PudewaCathy Ptak
9/8/2012Fairview Heights, IL - Mini ConferenceIL - Fairview HeightsIEWAndrew PudewaCathy Ptak
9/22/2012Kingwood, TX - High School Essay IntensiveTX - KingwoodIEW

10/1/2012Webinar: Unit 3: Moving Forward: Success with StoriesOK - Locust GroveIEWAndrew Pudewa
10/29/2012Webinar: Unit 4 Reports: The Lynchpin for Structure & StyleOK - Locust GroveIEWAndrew Pudewa
12/3/2012Webinar: Unit 5: Writing from PicturesOK - Locust GroveIEWAndrew Pudewa

Sunday, March 18, 2012

Free Writing Aids (IEW teacher created)

Free Downloads

Free Writing Aids:
A basic essay is very much like a triple decker hamburger – just add ketchup!
5 Paragraph Burger with Ketchup


Too many “he’s and she’s” in your story? Here’s a way to avoid repeating the same name or pronoun for your characters throughout your stories. The same principle works for terms in reports and essays, too!
Character Combos

Ed/Adj Starter List, especially for IEW users
EDADJ Starters

A brief list of similes, metaphors, and personification to get students started
Figures of Speech

A handy list of easily confused Homophones
Homophones

ING Starter List, especially for IEW users
Outer ING Starters

Passive Verbs Poster
Passive Verbs Poster

A list of synonyms for SAID by theme  
SAID by theme

Handwriting Pages
I used The Institute for Excellence in Writing Linguistic Development Through Poetry Memorization program to make handwriting practice pages for my daughter’s handwriting workbox this year. 


Here’s a peek at the Brekke Bunch’s workboxes. 
I am so excited to finally have handwriting content that will hold her interest and have purpose. She’s my “funny bunny” of the three and enjoys everything laced with humor. Thus, I used poems like: 
“Ooey Gooey” and “Rebecca, Who Slammed Doors for Fun and Perished Miserably” by Hillaire Belloc. 
I also added “Be Glad Your Nose is On Your Face” by Jack Prelutsky to round out the 23 weeks of lessons. 

I printed 4 of each lesson, so she will practice the same poem for 4 days in a row, and we will practice them out loud along the way as well. I am so thrilled with these pages, I just had to share. We’re using Pre-Cursive slanted font at this time. You can download them for your own family use below.

ExInPoetryHW

Alright, I did it again, only this time in Modern Cursive. Have fun!
ExInPoetryCursive


Bonus: “After the Party” by William Wise
After the Party


About the teacher who created these:
A graduate of Moorhead State University with a BS in English, Patsy Brekke (a.k.a. Ms. B.), has been an English teacher since 1987. She has taught English, Social Studies, Math, Science, Reading and Study Skills in Minnesota, Oregon, and California. She has extensive experience with the California Achievement Writing Project and scoring timed essays, the Achievement Via Individual Determination Program (A.V.I.D.), The Institute for Excellence in Writing (IEW), Curriculum Development, and Leadership Training. On two occasions, Ms. B. was nominated Site Teacher of the Year at Wilson Academy of International Studies in San Diego, California. She proudly received the A.V.I.D. Teacher of the Year award from the San Diego County Office of Education in 1993.
As Ms. B.’s desire is to come alongside other parents and take the mystery and misery out of writing, she has tutored writing at The Academy through YEAH (Youth Educated At Home) since 2001 and at WEST since 2009. She is the creator of the Writing Foundations Inc. Live Classes and Online Courses, and the author of the timed essay program Essays on Demand. Accredited in 2008 by the Institute for Excellence in Writing, Ms. B. has received the highest ranking of Accomplished Instructor. On occasion, she also works as a curriculum writer, consultant, speaker, and publishing editor.
Ms. B. resides in the Minneapolis area with her three children ages 11 to 17, a flock of finches, a coop of chickens, two cats, and one very silly beagle.

SOURCE:  http://www.writingfoundations.com/downloads/
Mrs. B's Blog

Friday, March 16, 2012

Join Andrew Pudewa as he presents, "Nurturing Competent Communicators"

After attending a wonderful seminar with Andrew Pudewa  I can say with complete confidence that I am an IEW covert. Yes, I was a skeptic at first.

The tools that the IEW programs help students master are simply amazing! The seminar allowed for enough Q&A and personal attention to provide excellent communication.

Yep, once again working from home with a homeschooler's dream company allowed us the time and gas/hotel/food money to experience this awesome seminar! Our wonderful Immaculate Heart of Mary co-op also helped tremendously!

I received the following information from IEW's Julie Walker. -- I want to pass it on!

This is an invitation to join Andrew Pudewa as he presents, "Nurturing Competent Communicators" on Tuesday, March 20, 12noon Central Time.
Listen live on the Media Angels Expo page here:

http://mediaangels. com/expos/ listen-live/

Thanks,

Julie Walker
Marketing Director
Institute for Excellence in Writing
www.excellenceinwri ting.com <http://www.excellenceinwriting. com/>
800-856-5815
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LAGNIAPPE (from Soutenus)

Here is a great seminar clip -- just in case you have never had the pleasure of attending any of Mr. Pudewa's workshops. The subject matter of this webinar is: "Freedomship" Education Take Your Children Off the Conveyor Belt and Into Life Through Internships and Entrepreneurship.

Andrew Pudewa begins speaking at the 5:40 minute mark Obviously, there is a long intro.



NOTE: @ the 51 (through 54) minute mark there is a compelling statement followed by consistently observed data and evidence that lead Mr. Pudewa to this opinion.

SOURCES:
http://www.collegeplus.org/leadershipwebinar/watch
http://www.excellenceinwriting.com/
http://www.collegeplus.org/
http://www.excellenceinwriting.com/ici

Info available here

Friday, February 17, 2012

Using Other Words for: SAID

We might write short stories, fantasy, science fiction, lengthy novels, romance, but if we write fiction, then somewhere along the line we'll come up against the word, 'said'. Does using it fill you with despair?

There are abundant words to use instead, yet to be truthful, you're probably best not using them.
Readers pay such little attention to 'said’ it effectively becomes invisible. If you use an alternative, it can become conspicuous; it can make a declaration and say – hey guys, look at me, I’m important - and at worst, can downgrade your book.

If it’s understandable who is speaking, then remove it completely. It's surprising how much more professional your work will look - in fact, let's make a rule - if it's obvious who's speaking, don't use anything.

You should certainly only substitute other words for said if the story needs you to accentuate the way of speaking. Please remember, gorging your story with alternatives makes your work amateurish.

Look at published books and you'll find most authors steer clear of them. My suggestion is - stop thinking about other words for said. Wherever you can, don't use anything.
For all that, if you need other words for said and you’re struggling to catch that elusive substitute, here’s a list of words you might be interested in trying.

Other words for said in alphabetic order

  • Accepted, Accused, Acknowledged, Admitted, Advertised, Affirm, Agonized, Agreed, Alleged, Announced, Answered, Appealed, Apply for, Arranged, Articulated, Asked, Asserted, Asseverate, Assumed, Assured, Attract, Aver, Avow,
  • Barked, Bawl, Bawled, Beamed, Beckoned, Begged, Bellowed, Beseeched, Blubbered, Blurted, Bossed, Breathed, Broadcast,
  • Cajole, Called, Carped, Cautioned, Censured, Chimed in, Choked, Chortled, Chuckled, Circulate, Claim, Comforted, Conceded, Concurred, Condemned, Confer, Confessed, Confided, Confirm, Consoled, Contend, Continued, Crave, Cried out, Criticized, Croaked, Crooned, Crowed,
  • Declared, Defend, Demanded, Denote, Dictated, Disclosed, Disposed, Disseminate, Distribute, Divulged, Drawled,
  • Emitted, Empathized, Encourage, Encouraged, Entreated, Exact, Exclaimed, Explained, Exposed,
  • Faltered, Finished, Fumed,
  • Gawped, Get out, Giggled, Given, Glowered, Grieved, Grinned, Groan, Groaned, Growled, Grumbled,
  • Handed on, Held, Hesitated, Hinted, Hissed, Hollered, Howled,
  • Impart, Implied, Implored, Importune, Inclined, Indicate, Informed, Inquired, Insisted, Interjected, Invited,
  • Jabbered, Joked, Justified,
  • Keened,
  • Lamented, Laughed, Leered, Lilted,
  • Maintained, Make known, Make public, Marked, Mewled, Mimicked, Moaned, Mocked, Mourned, Murmured, Mused
  • Necessitated, Needed, Noted,
  • Observed, Offered, Ordered,
  • Passed on, Pleaded, Postulated, Preached, Premised, Presented, Presupposed, Proclaimed, Prodded, Professed, Proffered, Promised, Promulgated, Proposed, Protested, Provoked, Publicized, Published, Puled, Put forth, Put out,
  • Quaked, Queried, Quipped, Quivered, Quizzed,
  • Raged, Ranted, Reckoned that, Rejoiced, Rejoined, Released, Remarked, Remonstrated, Repeated, Replied, Reprimanded, Requested, Required, Requisition, Retorted, Revealed, Roared,
  • Said, Sang, Scoffed, Scolded, Seethed, Sent on, Settled, Shared, Shed tears, Shouted, Shrieked, Shrugged, Shuddered, Snarled, Snivelled, Sobbed, Solicited, Sought, Specified, Spluttered, Spread, Stammered, Stated, Stuttered, Stressed, Suggested, Supposed, Swore,
  • Taunted, Teased, Testified, Thundered, Ticked off, Told, Told off, Tore a strip off, Touted, Transferred, Transmitted, Trembled, Trumpeted,
  • Understood, Undertook, Upbraided, Uttered,
  • Verified, Vociferated, Voiced, Vouched for, Vouchsafe,
  • Wailed, Wanted, Warned, Weep, Went on. Wept, Wheedle, Whimpered, Whined, Whispered,
  • Yawped, Yelled, Yelped,Yowled

Ways of modifying other words for said

Okay, so you’ve decided you really do need to use other words for said. You’ve found one you like and are determined to insert it in your text.
In order to make your book absolutely zing, you might want to go the whole hog and add a few other words to modify just how said is meant to be perceived.
The way it works is, you choose whichever other word for said you fancy, from the list above, then add a word or phrase after it, from the list below. For example, "She promised, with a controlled smile", or "He remarked, with a gloomy sigh" - But do not overdo it. Be very careful with it's use.
Adverbs or phrases to use with the other words for said
Abruptly, Absently, Acidly, After a moments reflection, Agreed, Angrily, Announced, Apologetically, Approvingly, Artfully
  • Broke in
  • Calmly, Caustically, Cheerfully, Commented lightly, Complacently, Concurred thoughtfully, Crossly
  • Didn’t question his judgement, Dryly
  • Encouraged, Expression denoting disapproval
  • False cheerfulness, Finished, Friendly fashion
  • Gently, Grated, Grinned, Groaned, Gruffly
  • Happily, Hotly
  • Impatiently, In a casual tone, In a chiding tone, In a courteous manner In a curious tone, In a dry tone, In a flirtatious way, In a level tone In a level way, In a non committal way, In a perpetually tired voice In a quiet way, In a rasping tone, In a small panicky voice In a soothing tone, In an attempt to…, In quiet amazement, Indulgently, Informed in an easy tone, Innocently, Inquired doubtfully, Invited, Irritably
  • Loftily, Loudly
  • Made the effort to sound reassuring, Meaning the words more seriously than they sounded, Mentally shrugged
  • Naturally, Nodded agreeably, Not wanting to sound pushy
  • Offered, Offhandedly, Optimistically
  • Pleasantly, Politely, Politely smooth, Probed Promised in a motherly/fatherly way, Prompted gently Promptly, Protested
  • Quietly
  • Reflectively, Roughly
  • Sadly, Said sympathetically, She went on, Sincerely, Smiled faintly, Smugly, Soberly, Softly, Sounded slightly brittle, Sparingly, Speculated, Sternly, Suggested
  • Tartly, Tautly, Teased softly, Tightly, Truthfully
  • Uncertainly, Unexpectedly, Urgently
  • Vaguely, Voice soft with affection
  • Went on loyally, Wilfully misunderstood, With a controlled smile, With a fond smile, With a gloomy sigh, With a note of relief, With a sad grimace, With a sad smile, With a sense of guilt, With a sigh of irritation, With burgeoning excitement, With conviction, With determination, With fire, With firm persistence, With gentle remonstrance, With gentle teasing, With graceful simplicity, With mock astonishment, With pleasure, With quiet empathy With simple directness, Without sounding unduly curious, Wryly
Be careful when using other words for said
I hope this has been of some help. The list of other words for said is by no means comprehensive, and I’m sure everyone will want to add a few favourites – if you think of some, put them in the comments box, and if they're sensible I'll add them to the list - - But please, please, use other words for said and their modifying phrases and adverbs, with care.
If you feel you must use alternatives, use them judiciously
Be sensible, sprinkle other words for said occasionally, and your work might just sparkle - pour with gay abandon, and your work will sink.

SOURCE: AJ Barnett



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    Tuesday, February 7, 2012

    Son's IEW Class 2011-2012

    for my reference:
    20 week class son is taking: 
     
    ESSAY WRITING 1   $175
    EW 1 – (Grades 9 +)

    5 weeks/ 1  hour class per week
    No previous experience with Excellence in Writing program.
    Covers Units VI & VIII of Excellence in Writing
    •  Students will work on one Basic Essay beginning with the structure of  
       'how to' write an essay following the 'formula'.
    •  Completing the essay with style will result in a well-developed, intelligent
      and sophisticated model. 
    •  SAT vocabulary is also introduced and students are expected to use the
      new vocabulary in their writing.
    Using the techniques learned in this class, students will be better prepared to tackle the high school essay and even the ‘essay-on-demand’ type exams. 

    ESSAY WRITING 2 $175
    EW 2 – (Grades 9 +)

    5 weeks/1 hour class per week
    Pre-requisite: EW 1
    •  Beyond the Basic Essay to the Extended, and Super Essays
    • Advanced Paragraphs, Introductions & Conclusions
    •  Advanced Stylistic Techniques - decorations, triples

    Help in formatting for essay submission: 
    http://www.webstersacademy.com/How_To_/How_To_Create_A_Writing_Table.html

    Who, Which Clause Practice

    Find a noun first. Then say something about the noun, immediately following it, in a clause. For example:

    The man was walking down the street with his dog.

     Examples of clauses according to the noun choice:
    man 
    "The man, who had an umbrella, was walking down the street..."
    street
    "The man was walking down the street, which was wet from the rain."
    dog
    "The man was walking down the street with his dog, which was splashing in the puddles left by the rain."

    Practice with simple sentences!!

    Sunday, November 13, 2011

    Very Short Sentence Examples from Literature and More

    Frailty, thy name is woman!˜ William Shakespeare
    Fortune favors the brave.˜ Virgil, Aeneid
    Brevity is the soul of wit. William Shakespeare
    "I have a dream..." Martin Luther King Jr.
    "People that care don't mind." Dr. Seuss
    "Adults are obsolete children." Dr. Seuss
    "Waste is worse than loss." Thomas A. Edison
    “Know thyself. ˜ Socrates
    “Nothing gold can stay. ˜ Robert Frost
    “Work is love made visible. ˜ Kahlil Gibran
    “Science is what scientists do. (From Statistics as Principled Argument by R P Abelson, 1995)
    “If it holds water, it's craft. If it leaks, it's art. (A standard line among potters)

    MOVIES
    Note: Let the kids guess which movie these come from!
    “Laugh it up, Fuzzball. (Star Wars)
    “Phone home. (ET, extra terrestrial)
    “Make my day.
    “I‚ll be back. (The Terminator)
    “You shall not pass! (Lord of the Rings)
    "I'm melting, mellllllting. .." (Wizard of Oz)
    “Oh Gad!" (Life With Father 1947)
    "I coulda been a contender." (On the waterfront 1954)
    "Blood makes poor mortar." (The Ten Commandments 1956)
    "So let it be written, So let it be done." (The Ten Commandments 1956)
    "I'm sorry, Dave. I'm afraid I can't do that." (2001: A Space Odyssey 1968)
    "Here's looking at you, kid." (Casablanca 1942)
    "We'll always have Paris." (Casablanca 1942)
    "Round up the usual suspects." (Casablanca 1942)
    "Play it, Sam. Play As Time Goes By." (Casablanca 1942)

    SHAKESPEARE
    “My heart Is true as steel. (A Midsummer Night‚s Dream, Act ii. Scene 1).
    "There's daggers in men's smiles." - (Macbeth, Act II, Scene III).
    "What's done is done." (Macbeth, Act III, Scene II).
    "Fair is foul, and foul is fair." - (Macbeth, Act I, Scene I).
    "I bear a charmed life." (Macbeth, Act V, Sc. VIII).
    "Et tu, Brute!" (Julius Caesar, Act III, Scene I).
    "Beware the ides of March". (Julius Caesar, Act I, Scene II).
    “And thereby hangs a tale. (The Taming of the Shrew, Act iv. Scene 1).
    “Tush! tush! fear boys with bugs. (The Taming of the Shrew, Act i. Scene 2).
    "I 'll not budge an inch." (Taming of the Shrew, Induction, Scene I).
    "Off with his head!" (Richard III, Act III, Scene IV).
    “Are you good men and true? (Much Ado about Nothing, Act iii. Scene 3).

    POOH
    "Rabbit's clever," said Pooh thoughtfully.
    "Yes," said Piglet, "Rabbit's clever."
    "And he has Brain."
    "Yes," said Piglet, "Rabbit has Brain."
    There was a long silence.
    "I suppose," said Pooh, "that that's why he never understands anything."
    [From The House at Pooh Corner by A A Milne, 1928]

    Note: Here's a topic/clincher VSS!
    "Now, what I want is, facts. Teach these boys and girls nothing but Facts.
    Facts alone are wanted in life. Plant nothing else, and root out everything
    else. You can only form the minds of reasoning animals upon Facts: nothing
    else will ever be of any service to them. This is the principle on which I
    bring up my own children, and this is the principle on which I bring up
    these children. Stick to Facts, sir!" —Dickens-
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